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  • #46
    They're filming all over the place. But yeah they have a spot in Taylor. So does Dusk to Dawn, the new Robert Rodrieguez TV series on the El Rey Network about cartel vampires. lol.
    http://www.amazon.com/Viralution-Don...don+kehlenbeck

    www.facebook.com/TheViralution

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    • #47
      Cool. I can read it with my Prime account. Will give it a go.
      "Self-government won't work without self-discipline." - Paul Harvey

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      • #48
        Sure can! forgot to mention the book is available for free to amazon prime members!
        http://www.amazon.com/Viralution-Don...don+kehlenbeck

        www.facebook.com/TheViralution

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        • #49
          How hard was it to get on amazon?

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          • #50
            Originally posted by tribaltalon View Post
            Sure can! forgot to mention the book is available for free to amazon prime members!
            Dah! There's a catch, you have to own a Kindle product for it to be free. Kindle App on the smart phone doesn't count.

            Originally posted by 03mustangdude View Post
            How hard was it to get on amazon?
            Just pay for Amazon Prime. There's a one month free trial membership if you already have an Amazon account.
            "Self-government won't work without self-discipline." - Paul Harvey

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            • #51
              seriously? dang i didnt know that. guess you'll just have to pay the measly 3.99 for my awesome book
              http://www.amazon.com/Viralution-Don...don+kehlenbeck

              www.facebook.com/TheViralution

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              • #52
                So I bought the e-book, read it and reviewed it (short) on amazon.

                I'll be perfectly honest, I liked the book a lot. I will say that I read when relaxing for sleep, so sometimes I miss things.

                Below is some nit picking. The reason I'm taking the time is I want to see this series continue. The premise is bad ass and the story all-in-all was awesome and fairly unique.

                However, at the beginning it felt a little discombobulated and firmed up the story well as the book went on. While reading though, sometimes I'd have to back track to keep up. Understand this is a compliment - but I don't do that with Clancy books. Somehow (don't know the difference) they are serving up the content a little smoother/simpler

                I noted several military inaccuracies. You don't call Army NCO sir and Army Captains do not command divisions. If a CPT were doing it out of necessity (not likely) it was not clearly outlined. There were more but I quit noting them and just enjoyed the book.

                Little things like the infected being uber agressive and quickly tearing people apart at the beginning and then at the end being slow at eating folks. Was that because they were fading out or otherwise?

                Some of the battle talks, it was difficult to draw a mental picture.

                It would've also been nice to dive more into the soldiers, specifications...etc...etc. As an example, when they were not getting their drink - it would have been nice to know how much further they could go and so forth. They were needing to drink fairly soon into it - but if I recall right they went 3-4 days without it.

                Again, this is all nit-pick stuff that *I* feel would have enhanced the book. Some more detail, but at the same time don't drag it on too far. If you release the next book, I'll certainly buy it and read it. I've read thousands of these types of books and if not in the top 20, certainly the top 100 and the story is clutch for it all.

                Also I know somethings may have been left vague (more details on the drink and its purpose) on purpose for future books.

                Good job on your first book.
                Originally posted by MR EDD
                U defend him who use's racial slurs like hes drinking water.

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                • #53
                  you're a baller now. congrads
                  Don't worry about what you can't change.
                  Do the best you can with what you have.
                  Be honest, even if it hurts.

                  "Socialism is a philosophy of failure, the creed of ignorance, and the gospel of envy; Its inherent virtue is the equal sharing of misery" ... Winston Churchill

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                  • #54
                    Originally posted by GhostTX View Post
                    Dah! There's a catch, you have to own a Kindle product for it to be free. Kindle App on the smart phone doesn't count.


                    Just pay for Amazon Prime. There's a one month free trial membership if you already have an Amazon account.
                    Quit being a cheap fuck and buy it. Support the guy in his dream for fucks sake. I have prime and a kindle but still bought and enjoyed it.

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                    • #55
                      Originally posted by Pokulski-Blatz View Post
                      Quit being a cheap fuck and buy it. Support the guy in his dream for fucks sake. I have prime and a kindle but still bought and enjoyed it.
                      You're so goddamned angry, Patrick. lmao
                      Originally posted by BradM
                      But, just like condoms and women's rights, I don't believe in them.
                      Originally posted by Leah
                      In other news: Brent's meat melts in your mouth.

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                      • #56
                        Originally posted by bcoop View Post
                        You're so goddamned angry, Patrick. lmao
                        Not really, just unfiltered.

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                        • #57
                          Originally posted by Pokulski-Blatz View Post
                          Not really, just unfiltered.

                          No, I've noticed it too in the last 4 months or so. Nothing wrong with it per-say, just pointing it out.

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                          • #58
                            It's certainly worth the 4 dollars or whatever it was for it. I usually buy in the .99 cent books - but felt it was worth the money anyway.
                            Originally posted by MR EDD
                            U defend him who use's racial slurs like hes drinking water.

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                            • #59
                              Originally posted by talisman View Post
                              No, I've noticed it too in the last 4 months or so. Nothing wrong with it per-say, just pointing it out.
                              Exactly. I'm not picking on you, just having a laugh about it.
                              Originally posted by BradM
                              But, just like condoms and women's rights, I don't believe in them.
                              Originally posted by Leah
                              In other news: Brent's meat melts in your mouth.

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                              • #60
                                Originally posted by talisman View Post
                                No, I've noticed it too in the last 4 months or so. Nothing wrong with it per-say, just pointing it out.
                                Nothing has changed other than my tolerance for people is much less than it was. I guess I haven't noticed myself feeling any more angry.

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